Congratulations on your new phantom! You'll have a lot of fun with it for sure. As you're asking for any feedback, I can give you this (and it is of course completely up to you to follow some of my suggestions or not):
- Try not to move the copter too fast while filming (fast pan and camera tilts). This results in very disorienting and unpleasant to watch footage
- Try to fly your copter along a path to create more dynamic videos. Try to avoid just panning the copter while stationary in the air, fly along a route and try not to turn the copter to the right or left while doing this
- In scenes with objects in close distance to the camera, try to move the copter as smooth and even as possible. Every slight correction in your flight path is very noticeable if there are any objects close to the cam.
- At last, maybe try some color corrections or additional sharpening in post. This is an optional process, but it can get your footage to look awesome instead of just great.
And at last: Maybe be a little less "in-the-face" with your choice of music. Aerial videography in most cases is not just action-packed content, but in most cases just beautiful and even relaxing to watch. The music choice you've gone with does not really fit that mood perfectly, so you could maybe try something a little more subtle
Anyways, enjoy your copter and welcome to the forum!
