Nice pun w words beeline,
The music sucked, only because it was perfect for the setting. Not my favorite place.
Here's homework for you. Take the 2 children on bicycles and make them fly by while you are filming the top of a tree. Me heart woulda stopped.
**** good job. My hat's off to you.
Creeepie though... EEEeEEEEeeeEeEk