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I learned a lot from your critics and comments. So please criticize and comment as hard as you can! Thanks.
Very good. You will now be able to improve even more by gaining a little more logic and continuity. Ex. start and end with the same motive, it will give an experience of having a "trip" from which you come back from, more like telling a story.
Also try to assemble the clips so that the movements do not get so much back and forth, but forward ... forward ... forward, and then backward ... backward, not to right then to left so to right, but right, ... right, right, ... then left, ... left, etc. Not descending, rising, descending, rising; more ... descending ... descending ...descending, then rising, ... rising, ... ))