New video it's my 4th one! I need opinions

[Danteetnad]

Please give me your opinion on my newest video, I took all the advice from my last opinion thread. It was taken with my P3S. my YT Stray Films
Video:

 

[Kai Mele]

It feels like the same three pieces of footage being shown over and over.


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[Cobs]

What Kai said - also needs some higher altitude shot maybe looking straight down so we can see the whole area, a swoop over the trees and coming down low level maybe too

 

[Danteetnad]

Ya i know i didnt have that much footage sadly there was like only 1 nice day in the whole week and I was being eaten alive by mosquitos and I just wanted to finish up as quick as possible which was dumb


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[Cobs]

Haha no worries mate, you captured the moment