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I agree with the comment above. Nothing wrong with having an attractive female in shot - but that first one is being far too overtly sexual.
I also feel that you've gone overboard with the transitions and special effects, which, for me, quickly became annoying. The quick changes of shot with multiple short clips were also too numerous, IMHO.
On the plus side, some nice shots in the vid - but some reworking definitely needed.
The good parts: the boat and the water skii guy. Night shots OK and the coastline with the twin towers was beautiful.
Editing not so good. The white graphic lines, I dont understand them. The Hollywood logo is Confusing. Are we in Hollywood? If so, why show it? If not, why show it?
The lady, while attractive, gives it a very non professional vibe. As do the choice of music.
The golf course shots are dull. Some of the house shots were OK but mostly boring. Does not matter there’s nothing wrong with them, they were a little boring.
If I have 30 seconds of great material and 200 seconds of pretty good material, I always toss all the pretty good and keep only the great. Never show anything that is only 3/5 good. Only show top shots and let them believe everything else you do is too. Don’t bore people with just OK shots just to make video longer - it will only affect you negatively.
Just my opinion, listen if you wish.. or not.
If you post videos here and you don't like constructive criticism then.... ermmmm.... then sorry, just don't post them here...
Incredible! You know next to nothing about the people who have posted comments here, how clever, active or old they are, nor what they have achieved in their lives - but for some reason assume that it must be far less than you....I don’t mind comments. I mind people with no background in anything thinking they know everything. Most of the time people are very jealous of success
Incredible! You know next to nothing about the people who have posted comments here, how clever, active or old they are, nor what they have achieved in their lives - but for some reason assume that it must be far less than you....
Away with you!
Lol I knew it.The woman was a model I shot for a modeling agency in Miami. It was a recap video of jobs we did last year. I know you are probably sitting on your couch not doing anything to create content. Thanks for all your peaks of wisdom. When you can run a drone company you might be able to make a video like this
.....but it is still more enjoyable to watch than your video.
Thanks Steve!Agreed - a very nice clip. Well done!
The level of absolute ignorance in this post is just offensive. You might want to look into what the other person told you - I think it was ”Go away”I know you are probably sitting on your couch not doing anything to create content. Thanks for all your peaks of wisdom. When you can run a drone company you might be able to make a video like this
It's a long way from professional editing (on either side of the pond). And the fact you said "You won;t be disappointed" itself speaks volumes.
Immediately edited to add: ...which is a shame, because you're not without ability. "Less is more" is an industry standard advice.
OK, so you first picked on someone and challenged them to show what they could do - they did that and certainly my opinion was that it was far superior to what you seem able to produce and that you seem to have a lot to learn, including being able to accept constructive criticism, politely-made...I’m sure you know the industry standard. Let’s see you post a video for everyone to see. Oh yea you probably have never seen a editing program.
Guy shows up with Inspire footage on a Phantom board having tons of confidence and is not looking for critiscism but bragging (see thread title). We gave him some honest good and less good points but he could not handle it. Think he got what he deserved actually...Wow! A witch hunt... give the guy a break people. it’s amazing how you guys are easily triggered upon his reaction. Yes he was very defensive and couldn’t take any criticism but several of you are beating only one person. In other hand, I agree with most of you on your opinions but it’s better to start with something positive then come up with negative points. He at least put some effort into it. I’m not defending him, just saying constructive criticism is better than destructive...