Is it now okay to say n---er? Content wise I'd give it a 2 but if you want constructive criticism on the video itself:
I thought you were a little repetitive in your shots, and the set was trashy. If you were going for squalor, I would have amped it up a bit but I think you could have stuck all the extra stuff around back (buckets, wood, bbq grills). I would have spent a half an hour picking up the set at least.
You could have lit better, the guy to the right of the singer was in shadow and squinting when he wasn't. Slider and/or some jib shots would have gone a long way to overcoming the repetition.
On a posititve note, you did a pretty good job of synching up audio.