First Attempt

[eagleseye]

Here's my feeble attempt at shooting and editing.

Critiquing IS allowed and appreciated!

http://youtu.be/8xAB4h8rOpw

Let me know what you guys think!


Thanks,

Eagles Eye

 

[QYV]

go under the bridge next time!

 

[Jeff Clack]

I liked it...plenty of angles and light variances. Good job.

 

[hdrider]

I enjoyed it. It kept me watching. Nice job.

 

[DrTelemark]

Nicely done - sync'd with the music with most if not all of your transitions and a decent variety of angle and view changes to keep it interesting. I would try this with a different piece of music to compare the feel. It looked pretty serene but the music was more adventure or confrontational. Just my 2 cents.

 

[aljames]

Nice job! First effort? You'll make some spectacular films.

 

[eagleseye]

Thanks everyone!

I posted on facebook and had some people there recommending a softer music as well. I may rework it with another house I shot and soften the music.

Thanks again!