This was a lot of of diverse footage!!!
It's much more work you give yourself credit for. I wonder how long it took you to accumulate all of it.
The editing is not just what you stated: it's also the thought process that goes into putting this story together.
You have shown me parts of Hong Kong I had never seen and I have been there 3 times. Well done!
I would to suggest you host your videos on Vimeo instead of YouTube. I don't really know why that is but I find the video quality much better.
Hope someone notices you and that great things happen for you. Thanks for sharing.