Byrjunin / The Beginning


Personal project shot entirely in the Land of Fire & Ice.

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Jason, May I offer you some constructive criticism? Each individual scene is done nicely and well, but you have strung them together as a hodge podge with a little this and a little of that, and then back to this again. The subject matter is good. Now make it flow a little more logically from one place to another.
 
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Fire and Ice. Reminds me of Alaska, but I'll guess Iceland?
 
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Jason, May I offer you some constructive criticism? Each individual scene is done nicely and well, but you have strung them together as a hodge podge with a little this and a little of that, and then back to this again. The subject matter is good. Now make it flow a little more logically from one place to another.
I appreciate your honest critique. Part of the reason I chose the transitions that specific way was to follow the changes in the mood of the music. Another reason is the lack of movements in the footages. I just got the drone before going to Iceland, so I wasn't experienced enough to diversify the movements. If I had gotten more footages with similar aesthetics, I would have put them together like you said.
 

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